wtorek, 5 marca 2013

Challenge Day Five / Lemon

Taste never sweet memory of summer, friend, a proud child of Amalfi, that the sun kissed
Feel its leathery surface, that lets off a breeze of immaturity. Won't you get tempted?
Its coins bear a promise of good health and endurance... - A kilo, please

Day 5: Write a three-line poem about lemons without using the following words: lemon, yellow, round, fruit, citrus, tart, juicy, peel, and sour.
First attempt, too long: 

Come, traveller, have a taste of
A sun-kissed gem of terraced alotments
A proud child of Amalfi
Though not the sweetest memory of summer
Whose coins bare a promise
Of good health and endurance
And its leathery surface lets off
A breeze of immaturity
Won't you get tempted?
- a kilo, please

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